To give a real opinion I took a look at your art and I am impressed by the amount of colors you have
What could be a key factor is that you can see how to improve the shadow part so that they look a little more uniform and some lighting parts, as well as improve the perspective
Something I clarify is that I don't have the slightest idea how to draw but I try to be honest (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧
Iona927
The outlines
(and the BOOTAY)
ZodiaWave
You're not wrong either. Posted something for today on a discord server earlier, folks really liked how the lineart looks. Might try taking my own advice s'more.
(and I'd gladly include more cheeks yea)